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If I could shape the moon
Contributed by
skinsfan
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Friday, 30th April 2004 @ 12:25:30 AM in AEST
Topic:
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If I could shape the moon,
I'd take a golden knife.
I'd cut out little pieces,
and shape it like my wife.
I'd have her eyes as stars
and shine them very bright.
So that everyone on earth,
could admire her at night.
I'd take Saturns rings,
add them to her red hair
and then I'd make a wish,
that I could be buried there.
Because she's my inspiration
and she will be to the end.
If not reincarnated as her husband,
I'd want to come back as her friend.
Our life is full of good times,
that we will always share.
I wish us many more,
because thats how much I care.
Copyright ©
skinsfan
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2004-04-30 00:25:30]
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Re: If I could shape the moon
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by emystar on
Friday, 30th April 2004 @ 12:33:53 AM AEST
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Lucky lady she is u not only luv her but ur very talented.
Great write.
luv, huggs,
emy |
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Re: If I could shape the moon
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by thumper on
Friday, 30th April 2004 @ 01:01:39 AM AEST
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To be loved that much.....wow! I really liked this poem. Your wife is a very lucky woman! Keep on writing and I'll keep reading. Like your writes so far.
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Re: If I could shape the moon
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 30th April 2004 @ 01:42:36 AM AEST
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What a lovely caring tribute to the woman you love. Wishing you many more years of happiness together.
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Re: If I could shape the moon
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by shelby on
Friday, 30th April 2004 @ 03:43:19 AM AEST
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so romantic
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Re: If I could shape the moon
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 30th April 2004 @ 02:52:16 PM AEST
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That was beautiful, fantastic title too!
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