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Silence's Demand
Contributed by
reprobate
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Thursday, 29th April 2004 @ 11:48:38 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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A wayward sunbeam peeking through drawn shades
Playing on in the silence without a care
Wandering alone, seeking some special someplace
Dancing almost purposely, continually, first here, then there
What drives your seemingly hapless intrusion
Have you come to mock the peace of solitude
Did some tired dream make a plaintive call
Or were you drawn by dark's quiet attitude
Just sitting here, watching the meanderings
No comfort can be found in the shared alone together
Anguish found a soothing within ebon mantle
You're just rememberance's pain on illuminated tether
Flee this place. Go now from my shadowed retreat
Leave me. Let me to my solitary musing
Return to the outside bright from whence you came
The night's tears and the memories of day are too confusing
Copyright ©
reprobate
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2004-04-29 23:48:38]
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Re: Silence's Demand
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by Rylo on
Friday, 30th April 2004 @ 12:03:31 AM AEST
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| This was a great poem, keep them coming. |
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Re: Silence's Demand
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 30th April 2004 @ 12:07:13 AM AEST
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Ron is right, great poem. I would have to sway more towards bitter anger from the past.
"Or were you drawn by dark's quiet attitude" for some reason really struck me. I like that line immensely.
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Re: Silence's Demand
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by ladyfawn on
Friday, 30th April 2004 @ 12:31:38 AM AEST
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aye, are you inside my head? lol, this is how i feel when im in a shadowy mood and the sun comes happily streaming in and chufs me, this poem is so excellent, written to vivid image filled perfection, keep 'em coming mike, i do so love your mind and poetry:) hugs n' love nessa
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Re: Silence's Demand
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by shelby on
Friday, 30th April 2004 @ 01:12:59 AM AEST
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beautifully done captured so many feeling..........
Michelle |
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