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No One Knows... Just How I Feel ( A Ballad Of Love... Just For You )
Contributed by
kidpoet_213
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Thursday, 29th April 2004 @ 11:07:59 PM in AEST
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There's a little voice... inside my head... that plays over and over again...
It says that I should just... let go of you...
But I can't bring myself... to do that...
Not just now... no... not ever...
'Cause I love you... so
No one had better dare and try to steal away...
My love for you
'Cause it's buried too deep inside my heart...
Entwined with the innermost parts
Wrapped so tightly within...
You'd have to break through this encrusted soul... to even find it
'Cause no one knows... just how I feel...
Just how sometimes... my life seems so unreal...
When I'm with you
Oh... how my heart... it aches for you...
When you're not here...
And now it sings... this ballad of love... just for you
Straight from a heart so true...
Sometimes you've asked me...
"Why do you love me so much?"
And my answer has always been the same...
It's just because... I see... a little bit of me... in you...
It comes shining through... everyday...
It's in the way that you smile..
And those beautiful eyes too...
It's in the little things that you say and do...
And this is why... I'm so in love with you...
'Cause no one knows... just how I feel...
Just how sometimes... my life seems so unreal
When I'm with you...
Oh... how my heart... it aches for you...
When you're not here...
And now it sings... this ballad of love... just for you
Straight from a heart so true...
No one knows... just how I feel... until...
I sing this ballad of love... just for you...
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Re: No One Knows... Just How I Feel ( A Ballad Of Love... Just For You )
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by emystar on
Thursday, 29th April 2004 @ 11:40:48 PM AEST
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Hey kiddo,this is a very good write. Many will relate to this one.
good work.
luv, huggs,
yo momma,
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Re: No One Knows... Just How I Feel ( A Ballad Of Love... Just For You )
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by Mortis-Dark on
Thursday, 29th April 2004 @ 11:47:06 PM AEST
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Good song, but the words dont really have that rhythmic beat so to speak to them. No climax. I dont really see how this could be a song. But with all criticism theres good too. In this "poem" i feel your passion with much reguard and understand your feelings.
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