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bed of roses
Contributed by
crystalnebulina
on
Thursday, 29th April 2004 @ 11:04:54 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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from out of the turquoise sea
in the season of spring
it was then i first seen the Dark Pirate in his
long black cape
he glanced my way
i was oh so mesmerized
i could have never of guessed the heartache he would he would bring
on a crescent moonlight night
out by the ocean's shore
he was there
turned around...his eyes of onyx and a granite face
he handed me a blood red rose
on his cruel lips he wore a smile
a smile i should have never adored
words he whispered in my ear, of his love for me so true
said he'd give me all the love i needed
and take away all my loneliness
he'd always be there for me
and all the while i quickly fell under his spell
under his spell oh how quickly i fell
then darkness surrounded me like a cloak
then next morn' when i awoke...on a bed of roses
blood red roses that were everywhere
but my love was not to be found anywhere
all he left for me were these blood red roses
their sickly sweet perfume permeating the room
in the menacing silence i felt my heart begin to break and cry "if only i knew"
"if only i knew."
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Re: bed of roses
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by Essentially9 on
Thursday, 29th April 2004 @ 11:15:35 PM AEST
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| very well written. |
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Re: bed of roses
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 30th April 2004 @ 05:20:25 AM AEST
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Very nice :) and he was a fool hehehe
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Re: bed of roses
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by UrShadoW on
Friday, 30th April 2004 @ 12:57:37 PM AEST
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| great poem! I can relate to it because my poems are basically about the same situation. |
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