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Falling
Contributed by
dormantwhispers
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Thursday, 29th April 2004 @ 10:52:57 PM in AEST
Topic:
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As I stand here on the ledge,
I feel this wind I had not noticed before.
It smelled sweet with cool warmth,
And swept me off the ground.
I fly through the air,
Going further and further down.
My surroundings are nothing but faint lights,
Passing faster and faster
Until they are nothing blurs.
Until I fall asleep.
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2004-04-29 22:52:57]
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Re: Falling
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by HOPE4ME2 on
Thursday, 29th April 2004 @ 11:16:37 PM AEST
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WOW.....Found this poem grabbing my heart, made me wonder what direction you were heading....sure this must have some deep meaning within yourself....loved it !!!!!!!
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Re: Falling
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by dormantwhispers on
Thursday, 29th April 2004 @ 11:20:39 PM AEST
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| I think I forgot a word or two when I posted this poem. |
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Re: Falling
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by dormantwhispers on
Saturday, 1st May 2004 @ 11:59:38 AM AEST
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| Yeah. No kidding. |
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Re: Falling
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by SuperAsh16 on
Tuesday, 4th May 2004 @ 10:38:45 PM AEST
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| treeska, i lub your poems. always so dark and heart-wrenching. i dont think u have many psychological problems. i just think u speak from the heart. and thats what good poetry is all about. i lub de treeska also. byebyes! |
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Re: Falling
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by dormantwhispers on
Saturday, 8th May 2004 @ 03:18:53 PM AEST
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| Me hearts you too Ashy |
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