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daddy
Contributed by
juggalette_chick666pk
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Thursday, 29th April 2004 @ 09:35:06 PM in AEST
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ChildrensPoetry
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I jump up and down with great excitement,
Daddy is finally home,
jofully I hug him,
Hes been gone for so long,
everyday that he has been gone I hope hes doin okay,
We all missed him and love him,
But daddy isnt feeling to good today,
I hopes he is alright,
Daddy is my friend and father,
I love my Daddy so much and I wish only the best for him,
Daddy is so strong,
I wish I could be just like him,
And I want him to know that even though hes gone,
Hes always in my heart,
And when he leaves,
I'll be waiting for him,
Waiting for him to come home again.
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2004-04-29 21:35:06]
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Re: daddy
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by OMEGA_ on
Thursday, 29th April 2004 @ 09:50:49 PM AEST
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well done
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Re: daddy
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 29th April 2004 @ 10:10:01 PM AEST
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This is really touching. Maybe you should give him a copy of this poem and he can take it with him everywhere. Really very nice work.
Rita |
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Re: daddy
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by Stonedraider23 on
Friday, 21st January 2005 @ 09:40:36 PM AEST
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| good write keep em goin |
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