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So How Could I...
Contributed by
OMEGA_
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Thursday, 29th April 2004 @ 08:49:16 PM in AEST
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Madly I do like her
Hardly I resist that magical attraction from her body
The desire of moving my hands over her soft skin or over her hair
She might be many meters away from me
But for my eyes she is all I can see
And for my heart she exists and always will be
I have so much to tell her, So much to say
But I don't know if she will care for me this way
For someone like me full of wounds from the past
All that is not enough to make me risk
Hurting my bleeding heart again or what still lasts
Without a real clear sign it will be so hard
Without a simple hope I won't be able to start
Cause this time I won't let my heart again tearing apart
So what if also all her behaves inverse what I feel
Careless and ignoring
Instead of insinuations wheel
Which for me is the sweetest prove
And the safest seal
So how could I believe that her love is real?
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Re: So How Could I...
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by emystar on
Thursday, 29th April 2004 @ 09:47:45 PM AEST
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Another good write, my friend.
Thanks for your comments on my work. I enjoy your work too.
Think I need to catch up tho.
luv, huggs,
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by AnGeL_M on
Thursday, 29th April 2004 @ 10:10:31 PM AEST
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This Is Really Good !!!!!!!!!!! I Liked It
Keep Em Coming......
*******LoVe**AnGeL********
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Re: So How Could I...
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by katyqueen35 on
Thursday, 29th April 2004 @ 10:12:52 PM AEST
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Awwww thais so sweet.
If you are really in love with this person you should let her know that you like her.
I know your afraid of being hurt but hey we all take chances ,even though we might get hurt in the long run.great poem.keep writing.
by the way thanks on the comment you made on my poem. Good luck. :) |
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Re: So How Could I...
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by ladyfawn on
Thursday, 29th April 2004 @ 10:50:32 PM AEST
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sometimes i wonder how my heart still beats, then i see something beautiful like your poem and i know why, tis love, i think the world of your expression of feelings:) hugs n' love nessa
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Re: So How Could I...
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by arden on
Friday, 30th April 2004 @ 09:00:26 AM AEST
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a beautiful poem my friend.
written wonderfully.
amazing.
well done.
Arden |
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Re: So How Could I...
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by xSlashXPrettyXSkinx on
Friday, 30th April 2004 @ 04:37:34 PM AEST
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Another beautiful poem OMEGA. This was sweetly peaceful with a little bit of wonder once it unfolded. I love your style. :) Great poem.
Lindsey |
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by JennyFruFru on
Saturday, 1st May 2004 @ 08:33:17 AM AEST
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| awww this is really pretty i wish someone would write a poem like this about me ... :) im sure she will like it... she probably doesnt even know that you feel that way about her... you have to tell her and then youll get the truth :) :) :) |
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Re: So How Could I...
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by Jenni_K on
Thursday, 6th May 2004 @ 05:46:30 PM AEST
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This is really beautifully written. Loved it..
Welcome to ypdc..
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Re: So How Could I...
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by Socke on
Wednesday, 7th July 2004 @ 02:00:43 PM AEST
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I love to read ur poems, cuz it showes me a part of ur soul....something deep, clear and in away inocent and v pure...u write from ur heart and that's really wonderful
just go on with it and let other people feel the emotions with u
great work
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by Broken_Skin on
Sunday, 11th July 2004 @ 05:28:15 AM AEST
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You are very talented..
Your poetry gives me butterflys
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