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Hourglass Eyes
Contributed by
yellow_sundragon
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Thursday, 29th April 2004 @ 07:37:21 PM in AEST
Topic:
fantasy
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Numb and faded were the hourglass eyes,
That stared and saw my death.
And yet it seems by folly's lies,
That I have yet to draw my last breath.
And, oh, I would agree with him,
But there's too much to be done.
It's too much to ask, I won't follow his whims,
The job's not over and I'm having fun.
Now, I know what he's thinking over there,
That I should just shut up and die peacefully,
For fate has decided, and who am I to dare
To fight against Destiny's Big Bully?
There is one big problem with this answer,
The war's not over and we haven't won.
Besides, I'm one of Fate's luckey dancers,
Which just means I dodge it, on the run!
So give back my sword, you oaf!
Hand me that sheild, then get outta my way,
Gotta go out to earn my bread loaf,
Hey! Hourglass eyes! I need to stand to face the day!!
Jaime Moran
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Re: Hourglass Eyes
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by ladyfawn on
Thursday, 29th April 2004 @ 08:03:10 PM AEST
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ohhh this is great sweetie, lol@oaf!!! has an inspirational quality, jaime, big huggies n' big love, nessa xxx
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Re: Hourglass Eyes
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 30th April 2004 @ 02:46:55 AM AEST
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Raistlin Majere, or Fistandantilus.
One of the greatest characters in modern fantasy fiction, greater than Gandalf, in my opinion . . .
Good poem. Nice to remenisce . . . |
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Re: Hourglass Eyes
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by bareforeyou on
Wednesday, 9th February 2005 @ 10:25:14 PM AEST
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| #1: I love your user name..and I was intrigued by the title of the poem..so it was a break for me that I also enjoyed it..very much.. |
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