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Dust of a Dying Rose
Contributed by
forever_lonely
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Thursday, 29th April 2004 @ 06:25:15 PM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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Upon a rose a snowflake falls
Derived from death, the silence calls
Each whispered word, a broken trust
From ash to ash and dust to dust
As time flows by, reflections taunt
When graveyards creep, the memories haunt
My rose to die at snowflakes touch
To lose all life within the clutch
A withered rose, this is my breath
To chant within my dance of death
My soul is lost, within embrace
Captured, lost, without a trace
This epitaph, illusion true
A tombstone of engraved taboo
My rose to lie enwrapped in trust
When ash to ash and dust to dust
'From Roses... to Dust'
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Re: Dust of a Dying Rose
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by Kie on
Thursday, 29th April 2004 @ 06:29:29 PM AEST
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Well I was about to leave for the night and I saw the title and author and couldn't resist.
You have mastered the ability to paint images in my mind. When I read your poetry, like this one it stays in my mind long after reading it.
The opening enthralled me and I read it 3 times!
A remarkable poem to be proud of.
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Re: Dust of a Dying Rose
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by ladyfawn on
Thursday, 29th April 2004 @ 06:29:38 PM AEST
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an excellent, brilliant beautiful poem, one of your best luke! i love it:) hugs n' love nessa
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Re: Dust of a Dying Rose
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by lostinmyself on
Thursday, 29th April 2004 @ 06:51:33 PM AEST
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| wow, this is breathtaking. i adore it. i am extremly in awe of your talent. amazing flow, language everything. brilliant write. phil xxx |
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Re: Dust of a Dying Rose
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by blueheart on
Thursday, 29th April 2004 @ 09:51:11 PM AEST
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| I loved the title, but I loved the poem even more. This was so remarkable, beautiful. |
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Re: Dust of a Dying Rose
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by Rakerman1999 on
Sunday, 2nd May 2004 @ 12:28:28 PM AEST
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It is your always flawless rhythm, your depth of thought and your precise rhymes that make you a top notch writer my friend. Your talent is amazing.
Very well done, but they always are ;o)
Larry |
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Re: Dust of a Dying Rose
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 3rd May 2004 @ 05:18:09 PM AEST
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As delicate as your rose, yet as imposing as your illusory epitaph. Enthralling reading.
I like. |
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Re: Dust of a Dying Rose
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by STRaNGe_LiNDSeY on
Wednesday, 5th May 2004 @ 03:30:55 PM AEST
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Mr. Luke, you have REALLY outdone yourself. This is beautiful in it's simplicity. The flow and rhyme are amazing. I loved it. But the lines, "A tombstone of engraved taboo" and "When ash to ash and dust to dust" were some of the best I have ever read EVER! Thank you much for this masterpiece.
Lindsey
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Re: Dust of a Dying Rose
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by Vitreous_Soul on
Monday, 10th May 2004 @ 06:48:45 AM AEST
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Luke, I have to tell you something...with this very poem, you have cemented yourself in the upper echelon, the elite of YPDC.
This is the strongest rhythm i've seen from you yet--it is nearly flawless. And the depth, in both imagery and subject, is profound. What else can I say...it's a true work of art and a pleasure to read.
Truly,
-V.S. |
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Re: Dust of a Dying Rose
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by Archie on
Sunday, 23rd May 2004 @ 04:52:04 PM AEST
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| An amazing poem for the death of a rose when the first chills come. |
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Re: Dust of a Dying Rose
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by fallen_eyes on
Tuesday, 23rd May 2006 @ 04:26:58 PM AEST
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What can I say....as always I loved it. Your poems are always so carefully thought out with the perfect rythm and use of words. Its really easy to read just sort of rolls of the tongue...which is good cuz then i can understand it!
luv ya T xx |
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