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I'm gone
Contributed by
tropicalheattt
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Thursday, 29th April 2004 @ 05:43:13 PM in AEST
Topic:
goodbyepoetry
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Lookin back on the times that we use to share
hopin that you realize, im no longer there
i thought you'd be the one to ask me to walk down the isle
i thought you'd be the one to make me smile
how could i let you do me wrong?
im walkin out the door and movin on
I was blind before but now i see...
WE DEFINATLY WERENT MEANT TO BE
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tropicalheattt
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2004-04-29 17:43:13]
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Re: I'm gone
(User Rating: 1 )
by xoblondiebabix3 on
Thursday, 29th April 2004 @ 05:49:01 PM AEST
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This poem was sad.. yet interesting..
Its a wonderful rhyme:)
I wish you the very best in your relationships and hope that you will find the right guy sumday
I enjoyed this very much
~*xObeaOx*~
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Re: I'm gone
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by Kie on
Thursday, 29th April 2004 @ 06:07:40 PM AEST
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Hello and a warm welcome hug to YPDC.
Your poem was full of emotion and loss.
I hope in twenty years you can look back and say you were glad it wasn't meant to be.
Enjoyed your poem.
Kie |
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