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Vanish From being
Contributed by
Soulless
on
Thursday, 29th April 2004 @ 05:34:46 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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It takes but one touch until your broken
Only I will be the one to gather pieces fallen
I can’t fix what’s foreign to me
I can’t hold what I can’t see
If they look away
We can leave this lie behind
Through my eyes you’ll be again
Don’t hold back just come with me
Well run away unto the night
Come and we’ll drift away from sight
Once we’re gone I’ll feel you there
Maybe we still are dreaming
Only now it’s real
Follow me away from this life of hurting
They cant hold us if they’re not looking
If they leave us be we can still dream
Just don’t look back
Don’t look back
If they look away
We can leave this lie behind
Through my eyes you’ll be again
Don’t hold back just come with me
Well run away unto the night
Come and we’ll drift tonight
If they look away
We can leave this lie behind
Through my eyes you’ll be again
Don’t hold back just come with me
Well run away unto the night
Come and we’ll run at midnight
Live under my light again
You were all I wanted
Come fly with me again
We can finally disappear
This night is our own
This night alone
Run and don’t look back
We’ll never look back
Copyright ©
Soulless
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2004-04-29 17:34:46]
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Re: Vanish From being
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 29th April 2004 @ 05:45:58 PM AEST
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| I can hear this being playeb by Stabbing Westward, this is good, I like it. |
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Re: Vanish From being
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by Kie on
Thursday, 29th April 2004 @ 05:52:11 PM AEST
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This was great!
I was going to highlight one stanza to reflect upon but truthfully the whole poem was perfection.
Kie |
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Re: Vanish From being
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by ladyfawn on
Thursday, 29th April 2004 @ 08:08:12 PM AEST
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ohhhh dreamy and beautiful! to run off with the one you love, as im taking it, but it sort of has a sad quality to it, like the person wont go with you.... hugs n' love nessa
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Re: Vanish From being
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by blueheart on
Thursday, 29th April 2004 @ 09:54:11 PM AEST
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| You seem to be writing a lot of dark poetry and you do it so well. I loved every line in this write. |
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