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What I Get
Contributed by
Rhei76
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Thursday, 29th April 2004 @ 05:17:11 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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I write these words with understanding and acknowledgement of how it is, and must be.
You see these words go out for none other than one, and only one shall these words reflect off.
Years ago night fell upon a town by the bay by the Gulf. Hollow was the eve before All Saints. Following in a crowd out about, in the dark. Love layed over sight as we teased one another, like the school kids we were.
But that was so long ago, so long.
Now, it's been 2 years since we last said love to each other. 2 years of silence. By the better choice of our conciousness.
I know you still love me. You know I could never disreguard my love for you. The truth is just so lonely when it comes to you.
For almost the better part of my life, it was you. You were the one to make me mad, angry, happy, in awe. It was you through all our hard time. Excepting, ignoring, just plain out forgiving my ignorance. It was you that taught me.
It's been 2 years of silence, 3 without thought, 4 without a kiss, 5, and 5 with out you.
I write these thoughts with understanding and heart ache that you will never read. But I guess that's what I get. No longer can I make you cry or smell your sweat.
LOVE YOU, LOVE!
Guess that's what I get.
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Rhei76
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2004-04-29 17:17:11]
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Re: What I Get
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by Kie on
Thursday, 29th April 2004 @ 05:25:42 PM AEST
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Nostalgic, reflective and filled with overwhelming yearning. Really touches the heart to read this.
"It's been 2 years of silence, 3 without thought, 4 without a kiss, 5, and 5 with out you."
Very powerful lines.
I hope it all works out in the end for you.
A great poem by the way.
Kie
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Re: What I Get
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by AnGeL_M on
Saturday, 1st May 2004 @ 01:49:06 AM AEST
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This Is Really Sad !!!!! Very Powerful And Heartfelt Write...Hope Everything Works Out For You....
******LoVe**AnGeL********
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