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He makes me

Contributed by cheech on Thursday, 29th April 2004 @ 04:52:02 PM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry

he laughs so loud its all funny
he doesn't spend his money
foolishly,but he calls me his honey

hes all i wanted to find,hes all i ever dreamed
of,hes all mine,when i was younger,i thought
about a man just like you,i understand

he makes me laugh,he makes me cry
he makes me smile,he makes me pround
he stands tall with me,i'll never fall
without him catching me,catching me

time after time i've told you this but it never
hurts to hear it more than usual,i love you
ya sometimes i can hate you,but you're human
you make mistakes just like me

you're on your second chance with me,but i'll
give you how ever many you need,cuz i love you
so much,i'm not just your lover,i'm also your
best friend

he makes me laugh,he makes me cry
he makes me smile,he makes me pround
he stands tall with me,i'll never fall
without him catching me,catching me

sometimes you make me so happy i just need to cry for
a few moments,as i keep my eyes patiently focused on you
i realize just how much you really love me,with one look
i can tell,that you're lost without me

i need you here,i feel all alone yet so many are
around,looking in a crowded room but all i could see
is you,even when you weren't there,i saw you
staiing right at me in my eyes

i'm lost without you,i feel like i skipped a few
long years and some how got old and moody
i know you're lost without me,i know you love me
dearly and you wouldn't do anything to hurt me

he makes me laugh,he makes me cry
he makes me smile,he makes me pround
he stands tall with me,i'll never fall
without him catching me,catching me

Copyright © cheech ... [ 2004-04-29 16:52:02]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: He makes me (User Rating: 1 )
by lil_angel on Thursday, 29th April 2004 @ 05:32:14 PM AEST
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This is really good! Good work, word to the wise, some dont comment on poems that say "comment" But this is a good peice!

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