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Dark abyss
Contributed by
quilted_rag_doll
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Thursday, 29th April 2004 @ 04:48:48 PM in AEST
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I lay here alone,
in this dark abyss.
I look up, to see a faerie of light,
dancing across the ceiling,
reflected off of a cold, iron blade.
A red river flows down my pale skin,
as my hollow eyes, follow its smooth path...
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2004-04-29 16:48:48]
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Re: Dark abyss
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by lil_angel on
Thursday, 29th April 2004 @ 05:27:12 PM AEST
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| Short, and too the point! Great job! |
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Re: Dark abyss
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 29th April 2004 @ 05:48:01 PM AEST
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| Short yet gripping. |
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Re: Dark abyss
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by reprobate on
Friday, 21st May 2004 @ 10:21:09 AM AEST
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cool in a sad and terrifyingly hopeless sense.
never could think about cutting into my flesh. got way too many stitches from working to do it on purpose.
guess i'm too chicken sh--
hoping this is fictional, good write.
thanks for sharing |
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Re: Dark abyss
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by Broken_Skin on
Thursday, 7th October 2004 @ 01:14:46 PM AEST
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Blood is not just a vital fluid that runs through your viens
Its a stromger tear, that falls when things are too intense to cry
5/5 x |
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