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Lost
Contributed by
MysticFireFairy
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Thursday, 29th April 2004 @ 04:48:46 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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Wandering through the woods on a cold winter day.
Never did I know I wanted to stay
As the day became night
Never did she see the longing moonlight.
The stars shine deep into the night
Never did they seem to shine so bright
Soon it got dark and not so bright
but will I ever see the light so bright.
Dawn crepped up without a dance
I didnt look back without a upward glance
Tears fall down my face
but never did I want to leave this place.
I looked up at the sky what did I see?
I seen a girl but she isnt me.
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MysticFireFairy
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2004-04-29 16:48:46]
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Re: Lost
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by lil_angel on
Thursday, 29th April 2004 @ 05:26:32 PM AEST
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| This i really good! You have a wonderful talent! |
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Re: Lost
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 29th April 2004 @ 05:55:38 PM AEST
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| Wow, this is beyound breathlating. Great use of words. |
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Re: Lost
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by xoblondiebabix3 on
Thursday, 29th April 2004 @ 05:58:45 PM AEST
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Good write, I liked this line
I looked up at the sky what did I see?
I seen a girl but she isnt me.
:)
~*xObeaOx*~ |
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