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The Meeting
Contributed by
parkman
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Thursday, 29th April 2004 @ 04:17:19 PM in AEST
Topic:
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I have a date, gotta get ready
Washed and shaved, hair all tidy
Best suit on, look brand new
A couple of drinks, one or two
My hands are shaking, heart is pumping
Confused thoughts, head is thumping
Feeling afraid, of the loneliness ahead
Losing loved ones, I'm so full of dread
I've opened right up, never told you lies
You've guided me, with words strong and wise
I always listen, pay heed to what you say
So why be afraid, on this very day
Now I must lie down, rest my weary eyes
I see a shinging light before me,calling me to rise
My soul leaves my body, drifting slowly away
Happy and peaceful now, I've met my maker today
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Re: The Meeting
(User Rating: 1 ) by sicknivesevered on
Thursday, 29th April 2004 @ 04:37:18 PM AEST (User
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Well, I had to read this over again to completely understand it. Maybe I'm slow.... *scowl*. Arg. Good poem. |
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Re: The Meeting
(User Rating: 1 ) by xoblondiebabix3 on
Thursday, 29th April 2004 @ 06:05:44 PM AEST (User
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This is an awesome poem.. awesome possum..
XceLLenT rHyMe*!~ ;)
LyL
~*xObeaOx*~ |
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Re: The Meeting
(User Rating: 1 ) by europeanprincess on
Friday, 15th September 2006 @ 07:24:55 PM AEST (User
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this was a great read. some of the words i relate to and i really liked the second paragraph. i have sooo been there. |
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