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Black On Words
Contributed by
Exodus-On-Life
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Thursday, 29th April 2004 @ 03:25:42 PM in AEST
Topic:
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Swimming through apologies
Drowning in what always was
The past surrounds my face
Reminds me as it always does
The black that represents you
The pain I wear upon my chest
You seemed to take what you wanted from me
And then you seemed to forget the rest
The ache of tragedy
And the pains of today
I hate the way you look tonight
And still you scar me anyway
The shards of broken promises
As I bleed upon them on the floor
I tried to keep you here
And you ran laughing out the door
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Re: Black On Words
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by lil_angel on
Thursday, 29th April 2004 @ 03:27:22 PM AEST
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| This is really good! Great peice of work! |
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Re: Black On Words
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by afraid_of_fear on
Thursday, 29th April 2004 @ 04:51:21 PM AEST
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a beautifully painful write.. very good..
charlotte x_x_x |
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