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Hurting
Contributed by
Lovely_4_steve
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Thursday, 29th April 2004 @ 02:54:50 PM in AEST
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You hurt me once, you hurt me twice.
My pain encreases every time I see you. You walk by without noticing me, its like I'm a spect of dust, and you just brush me off without even caring, but of course you hurt me. So you wouldn't care would you?
You think this is simple, but when you actually look at me and see my pain you wince at the fact that you can cause so much pain in one person. You have no idea how much I feel for you... You took this all away from me without a second thought. You said those awful words without even wondering how much they would affect me. You said "good-bye" and I cried. I wish more happiness to you then the happiness you could wish for me.
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Re: Hurting
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by lil_angel on
Thursday, 29th April 2004 @ 02:59:08 PM AEST
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| This is really good! Great peice of work! |
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Re: Hurting
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by Hyper on
Thursday, 29th April 2004 @ 03:02:56 PM AEST
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i've been down that road before. i hope you're feeling better.. good work.
-hype- |
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Re: Hurting
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 29th April 2004 @ 03:46:34 PM AEST
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Hey Britnee!!!
I think all your poems are great.
Love ya like a sis
Amber |
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Re: Hurting
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by mountainhigh on
Saturday, 8th May 2004 @ 04:15:38 AM AEST
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Its a circle, and always returns more as it comes back around, happiness is coming back your way.
Thank you for sharing. |
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Re: Hurting
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by tylerzmum on
Friday, 10th December 2004 @ 12:30:41 PM AEST
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| wow, reminds me of how i'm feeling right now.... |
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