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Saphire Tears
Contributed by
SAT
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Thursday, 29th April 2004 @ 02:27:45 PM in AEST
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These saphire tears
I shead are for you
You were my best friend
As older i gre
But in my time
Of pain and fear
Your tender words and
Love are not near
Only you can
Fix my broken soul
Just sit back as
Life takes its toll
From the bottom
Of my heart i cry
Genuine saphire tears go by
Somehow I know
The reason why you left
So that we would know
How muched you love us
And how you let it show
Copyright ©
SAT
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2004-04-29 14:27:45]
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Re: Saphire Tears
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by sugar0986 on
Thursday, 29th April 2004 @ 02:29:33 PM AEST
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Good Poem.
~Brittany~ |
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Re: Saphire Tears
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by Jackee_line on
Thursday, 29th April 2004 @ 02:37:59 PM AEST
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| my deepest sympaty, my thoughts are with you during this very hard time in your life. |
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Re: Saphire Tears
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by tiny_mo on
Thursday, 29th April 2004 @ 02:51:39 PM AEST
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| This is a good poem. A very good way to let your pain out. I'm sorry about your grandfather. Mo |
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Re: Saphire Tears
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by PumpkinPie on
Thursday, 29th April 2004 @ 03:26:10 PM AEST
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My sympathies for your loss.The death of a loved one is never easy,but please know that time does heal certain wounds and that hopefully those tears will become smiles when you will realize how present he still is in your life and how much he's happy up there.Communicating soul-to-soul is so much stronger than face-to-face,nothing can stand in it's way and the bond becomes unbreakable.I really don't know what else to tell you to diminish your pain except offer you my deepest condolences.
Sincerely,
PumpkinPie |
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Re: Saphire Tears
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by loveisendless on
Thursday, 29th April 2004 @ 04:00:11 PM AEST
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SORRY ABOUT YOUR LOSS! YOU'VE EXPRESSED IT VERY WELL IN THIS POEM YOU WROTE FOR HIM!! DID A GREAT JOB
SAT!!!
LOL-DAN!!!! |
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Re: Saphire Tears
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by Lost_Shadow on
Tuesday, 4th May 2004 @ 03:59:25 AM AEST
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Thank you for your comment. My sympathies go a long way for your loss. May he rest in piece and may your souls reunite one day.
This is a very touching poem I enjoyed it. |
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Re: Saphire Tears
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by JennyFruFru on
Tuesday, 4th May 2004 @ 01:39:27 PM AEST
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| so so sad hun... i hope your doing ok.. if u need anything PM me... |
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Re: Saphire Tears
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by SAT on
Tuesday, 4th May 2004 @ 08:07:38 PM AEST
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Thank you guys for the comments! I greatly appreciate all the support!
An eye for an eye makes the whole world blind |
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