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Her Pain, My Pain
Contributed by
bigtig6269
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Thursday, 29th April 2004 @ 01:55:38 PM in AEST
Topic:
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It made me sad to see her cry
All over one pitiful, pathetic guy.
When I saw her like that, it broke my heart
AHHHH!! I just want to rip him apart.
Couldn't he see how it made her sad?
I would killl for the chance that he had.
If she was mine, I would do her no wrong.
I've waited for that chance for oh so long.
But to see her bawl like that put me in a rage
Like a huge gorilla trapped in a small cage.
I feel connected to her, feling her pain
What is wrong with him, playing this game?
All for some stupid girl he had in the past
I should so break my foot off in his ***.
This dumb*** had the best woman in the world
and he's gonna leave her for another girl?
He needs to be in a straightjacket everyday
'Somebody call Shady Acres, he's headed that way!'
I can't express my pain and anger, or a mixture of the two,
But if she'd give me a chance, she'd see my love is true.
But it's amazing how all it took for this anger to leak
Was is a simple tear of pain falling from her cheek?
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Re: Her Pain, My Pain
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by kailadragon on
Thursday, 29th April 2004 @ 01:57:33 PM AEST
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wow Larry, nice poem, i had no idea you wrote that good...keep 'em comin'
Kaila
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Re: Her Pain, My Pain
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by lil_angel on
Thursday, 29th April 2004 @ 02:01:10 PM AEST
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| This is really good! |
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Re: Her Pain, My Pain
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 29th April 2004 @ 02:11:06 PM AEST
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i know the feeling.. good work.
-hype- |
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Re: Her Pain, My Pain
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by sugar0986 on
Thursday, 29th April 2004 @ 02:22:05 PM AEST
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Good Poem.
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Re: Her Pain, My Pain
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by Remy on
Thursday, 29th April 2004 @ 02:43:42 PM AEST
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hum... you sound like a fighter, good to have friends around like that... great writing by the way! ;0)
~Remy~ |
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