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Imperfection
Contributed by
eatfresh22
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Thursday, 29th April 2004 @ 01:02:23 PM in AEST
Topic:
spiritual
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We are all the same in many ways,
We compete with a game that each of us plays.
Mocking, insecurity, pain, and shame,
Imperfection is this destructing game.
Though all of us have numerous flaws,
We tear each other apart with our critical claws.
We fight the game; the game is a race,
A race with an uncatchable pace.
Why compete? What's there to gain?
Besides the insecurity, humiliation, and pain.
The sooner we recognize our infinite flaws,
The quicker we'll realize the Creator of all,
Is the only One who is purely
Perfect.
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Re: Imperfection
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by lil_angel on
Thursday, 29th April 2004 @ 01:05:26 PM AEST
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| Very good write! |
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Re: Imperfection
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by Brians_Sweety on
Thursday, 29th April 2004 @ 01:07:04 PM AEST
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Great poem I loved the ending!!! keep up the great!! work!
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Re: Imperfection
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by Jackee_line on
Thursday, 29th April 2004 @ 02:40:58 PM AEST
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| nicely done |
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Re: Imperfection
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by Wachumiri on
Thursday, 29th April 2004 @ 06:11:59 PM AEST
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True, how true.
Well written, Carrie.
Take care.
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Re: Imperfection
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by Fionndruinne on
Saturday, 1st May 2004 @ 04:21:35 PM AEST
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Well written indeed! But remember, it's the same with Clark, Carrie!
Me on the other hand...
(inside joke, people)
Andrew |
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Re: Imperfection
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by liquidsunshine on
Thursday, 27th May 2004 @ 03:38:28 PM AEST
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Amen! Well said. Short, sweet and to the point. Me gusta este poema mucho.
Love,
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Re: Imperfection
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by faith_my_eyes on
Friday, 9th July 2004 @ 11:14:28 PM AEST
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simply stated, and well stated at that. Our true perfection is from Christ alone.
Emily |
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