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Got my bones packed....
Contributed by
reilt
on
Thursday, 29th April 2004 @ 10:52:32 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Got my bones packed
Just in case!
Shatter this illusion
Or shall we call it fear?
Let's....A spade
After all.
I know the fruits of my labour
Maybe you are still out picking,
Choosing?
I've conceived that thought,
Ripe,
And born of that,
A decision...
Let the time be your's,
Let me own the weight
And wait
To add the broken pieces,
My heavy heart,
To the load.
Copyright ©
reilt
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2004-04-29 10:52:32]
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Re: Got my bones packed....
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by arden on
Thursday, 29th April 2004 @ 11:09:48 AM AEST
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kinda creepy but awesome nonthelss.
very well written.
well done keep it up.
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Re: Got my bones packed....
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by Stitch on
Thursday, 29th April 2004 @ 11:27:52 AM AEST
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I'm not sure what to make of this. Interesting. You remind me of Merry on this write. Have you read her?
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Re: Got my bones packed....
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by Cynthia on
Thursday, 29th April 2004 @ 04:53:53 PM AEST
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| Dee,this write seems so sad. Great job. *S* Cynthia |
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Re: Got my bones packed....
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by ladyfawn on
Thursday, 29th April 2004 @ 06:44:03 PM AEST
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| wonderful, i love this one:) hugs n' love nessa |
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