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Love Is...
Contributed by
mickie
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Thursday, 29th April 2004 @ 10:27:54 AM in AEST
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Love is...
Like sitting down at the blackjack table,
trying one hand for all the winnings,
holding nothing back...
Hit me!!! Give me everything you got!!!
One chance to claim it all, one chance to be true,
I've lost a few hands, it's all in the rules.
But I'm willing to bet it all.
Some in the crowd think I'm foolish, while others cheer me on.
Truly, but surely the battle is lost, but the war I can still win!
I hold my breath and wait for the card to be turned over...
Did I win? Did I lose?
Only you can tell me!
Copyright ©
mickie
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2004-04-29 10:27:54]
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Re: Love Is...
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by Hurretje on
Thursday, 29th April 2004 @ 10:35:31 AM AEST
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Fantastic poem, love is a roller coaster, let's take a ride, girl!!
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Re: Love Is...
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 29th April 2004 @ 10:39:30 AM AEST
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| Interesting poem. Is completely true. WHo knows what love will give you until ytou actually face it. Great Poem! |
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Re: Love Is...
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by reilt on
Thursday, 29th April 2004 @ 10:57:07 AM AEST
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great poem... ilove the analogy...
love being like a game of cards, a gamble...great stuff...i loved it |
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Re: Love Is...
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by sugar0986 on
Thursday, 29th April 2004 @ 02:45:39 PM AEST
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Good Poem. Great Write.
~Brittany~ |
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Re: Love Is...
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by ladyfawn on
Thursday, 29th April 2004 @ 06:47:52 PM AEST
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ohhh this is great, mickie, captures all the feelings, hope and emotions that come with new love, very sweet:) hugs n' love, nessa
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