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- ~ - The Vulture - ~ -
Contributed by
Cynthia
on
Thursday, 29th April 2004 @ 09:30:32 AM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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The vulture flies around the clear sky
and awaits for the death
of a lone travel in the desert,
the sun beats down
on his already tired, weak body.
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He is dehydrated from his
long walk across the dry desert floor.
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His legs become weak
and he collapses on the ground,
the vulture sweeps in
and laughs in his face....
knowing he will be dead soon.
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The lone traveler tries to
gain some strength to get to his feet,
but the heat of the desolate desert
has made him so weak,
that he can't get up.
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So he lays there and
awaits his fate with death.
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The vulture takes advantage
of the fallen traveler
and starts eating him alive,
the traveler screams out in pain....
but there is noone around
to hear his painful cries.
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The vulture laughs
in the traveler's face,
while he pecks his eyes
out of his sockets.
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Copyright Cynthia Jones
Apr.29/2004
Copyright ©
Cynthia
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2004-04-29 09:30:32]
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Re: - ~ - The Vulture - ~ -
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by Hurretje on
Thursday, 29th April 2004 @ 10:43:51 AM AEST
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You are all getting dark here, girl!
Cruel and chilling...
Greetz,
Hur |
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Re: - ~ - The Vulture - ~ -
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by reilt on
Thursday, 29th April 2004 @ 10:59:25 AM AEST
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| such a well written poem...very interesting write...you are amazingly talented...hats off to you...with love dee* |
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Re: - ~ - The Vulture - ~ -
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 29th April 2004 @ 11:41:08 AM AEST
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Well, my dark friend, you seem to have found your venue. You are excellent at these. Seems you truly enjoy this. I think that is great. I really can't get into dark but I have tried. I am trying to write one more but it doesn't seem to want to be birthed. Maybe on a low day.
Hugs to you,
Rita |
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Re: - ~ - The Vulture - ~ -
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by loveisendless on
Thursday, 29th April 2004 @ 02:33:23 PM AEST
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REALLY DARK & PAINFUL! WELL WRITTEN THOUGH!!
LOL-DAN!!! |
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Re: - ~ - The Vulture - ~ -
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by ladyfawn on
Thursday, 29th April 2004 @ 06:41:37 PM AEST
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| excellent cynthia! but ewwww! lol, huggies n' love nessa |
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Re: - ~ - The Vulture - ~ -
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by venkat on
Friday, 30th April 2004 @ 01:48:01 AM AEST
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| Aggh..Cynthia..this is superb..I love to read your poems. venkat |
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