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Fools Angel
Contributed by
Soulrebel973
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Thursday, 29th April 2004 @ 02:25:34 AM in AEST
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I got an angel watching over me,
holding me balanced,
keepin the snakes venom outta me,
sittin in silence,
she loves and hates me for the way that im steppin,
She witnessed mad ounces,crack houses,
pain, love, hate, and affection,
she tries to see the better side a' me,
diggin deep inside of me,
But the world is good and evil and i feel that still inside of me,
on darker days she crys with me,
And when theres fear she hides with me,
and when i feel her love i hope to god she sits and smiles for me.....
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Re: Fools Angel
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by emystar on
Thursday, 29th April 2004 @ 02:31:23 AM AEST
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Great writing!
puts one to thinking.
luv, huggs,
emy |
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Re: Fools Angel
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by Hyper on
Thursday, 29th April 2004 @ 02:36:01 AM AEST
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| nice words, good flow.. good job. keep it up. |
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Re: Fools Angel
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by kalika_vidya on
Thursday, 29th April 2004 @ 02:36:29 AM AEST
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| I think this is really a nice poem..K |
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