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Contributed by
Hyper
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Thursday, 29th April 2004 @ 02:02:54 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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I can bring you home roses,
Each and every day.
But it doesn't mean
That I will always stay.
I can take you out to dinner,
Or a picnic in a park.
But that's no guarantee
That I will never break your heart.
I can buy you diamond earrings
To show you that I care.
But it doesn't mean
That I'll always be there.
I can tell you I love you
With a promise ring.
But if it's all that I give you,
Then it wouldn't mean a thing.
My love has deeper meaning
Than materialistic things.
My heart has set no limits
On all the happiness it can bring.
I want to do more for you
To make you feel
That my love for you is real.
I want to do all I can
With all my heart,
And be the best man I can.
I want to make it up to you
For all the times
That those guys have made you cry.
I want to give you everything,
The world to you,
Because you mean the world to me.
Copyright ©
Hyper
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2004-04-29 02:02:54]
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Re: More than
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by emystar on
Thursday, 29th April 2004 @ 02:57:26 AM AEST
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Beautifull, heavenly, tender, write.
luv, huggs,
emy |
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Re: More than
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by MoonlitAngel on
Thursday, 29th April 2004 @ 09:53:16 AM AEST
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That is soooooooo sweet!!!!!!!! Where have you been hiding??? lol I could use some meaningless roses and diamond earrings. Hehe. Verrrrrrry cute write!
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Re: More than
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by Archie on
Friday, 7th May 2004 @ 06:18:35 PM AEST
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| You wrote an awesome poem, the first 4 stanzas are the best to me. |
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