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Suicide
Contributed by
witwooo
on
Wednesday, 2nd October 2002 @ 09:30:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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My head my body,
It has no feelings,
I try and find why,
But there are no meanings,
My world has turned black,
My surroundings are grey,
Too tired to try,
And live each day.
I lie on my bed,
No thoughts in my head,
Pop some pills,
Or shoot the lead.
I scribble a note,
To say goodbye,
To tell them i love them,
And with reasons why.
Whiskey's going down nice now,
Pop a pill or two,
My minds getting sorted,
Another worlds in veiw.
My bodies becoming lifeless,
I'm motionless and still,
I am feeling very weary,
And pop another pill.
Tears rolling down my cheeks now,
No energy , no life,
I'm going to a better place,
Without trouble or strife.
My time in this world,
Has now all gone,
Goodbye - Godbless,
A new lifes begun.
Copyright ©
witwooo
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2002-10-02 09:30:00]
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Re: Suicide
(User Rating: 1 )
by S_K_Williamson on
Thursday, 3rd October 2002 @ 07:02:34 PM AEST
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Very well written I pray this is "only" a poem.
I could feel your pain and emptiness...hang on it will get better.
Great write my friend,
Sharon;) |
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Re: Suicide
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by Hiddendarkness1705 on
Saturday, 26th July 2003 @ 05:55:00 PM AEST
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This one almost made me cry. May it be the feelings I've had like this or the sadness I know you feel. Your the poet I will never be.
~Stacie~ |
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