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Waiting throught the sunless day
Contributed by
Rhei76
on
Wednesday, 28th April 2004 @ 11:45:50 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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You don't call
You don't write
I anticapate everynight
Like some under rated puppy
Just waiting to find you
So I can make you happy
You reply
By short and out of reach
No connection between you and I
As I wish you would teach
Me
I call to the dark
For my voice to ride the calm cool air to you
I pray in the sunless day
Hoping it's not to late
But
You don't call
You don't write
As eccepted another night
Like some old teddy
with your blanket
I'd love you to find me
Your reply
If any, always a day late
No connection between you and I
There's just a gate
No sweet ecstacy
In compassion or love
No connection between you and I
As I walk below, you fly above
In my sunless day
I await for you
By summer's edge
I await endless
For you to call
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Rhei76
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Re: Waiting throught the sunless day
(User Rating: 1 )
by lil_angel on
Thursday, 29th April 2004 @ 12:14:47 AM AEST
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| This is really good great job! I hope you get that call soon! |
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Re: Waiting throught the sunless day
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by emystar on
Thursday, 29th April 2004 @ 12:18:01 AM AEST
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Sad but really written well.
luv, huggs,
emy |
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Re: Waiting throught the sunless day
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by venkat on
Thursday, 29th April 2004 @ 01:00:46 AM AEST
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| Aah..pangs of love..sad and beautiful..well expressed. venkat |
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Re: Waiting throught the sunless day
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by reilt on
Thursday, 29th April 2004 @ 11:34:09 AM AEST
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| very sad but so beautifully written. i hope you don't have too long to wait for that call |
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Re: Waiting throught the sunless day
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by jaeann on
Thursday, 29th April 2004 @ 12:11:25 PM AEST
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| you convey the ache so very well......... |
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