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The Pen
Contributed by
Mortis-Dark
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Wednesday, 28th April 2004 @ 10:58:29 PM in AEST
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The pen writes down our many emotions.
Our fear, pain, lies and our hate.
The pen is said to be a tool.
My pen is much more like a weapon.
Distorting the lines between facism and illusion.
Its said that its mightier than the sword.
The pen has brought plenty to their deaths.
It creates it own, its slander and speaks out our thoughts.
No speach and no breath.
The pen still lives.
But it just writes.
It holds our hopes in dreams.
Even the things that are dear to us.
Whar would happen if the pen betrayed us.
What if somehow we turned it against us.
What if.
What if it created a void, a blackend hole.
So black light couldnt escape.
So massivly huge we couldnt escape.
Copyright ©
Mortis-Dark
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2004-04-28 22:58:29]
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Re: The Pen
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by PRECIOUSBECKY on
Wednesday, 28th April 2004 @ 11:02:29 PM AEST
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| I COMPLETELY UNDERSTAND WHERE THIS IS COMING FROM- MY FAVORITE PART WAS THE LAST THREE LINES -GOOD WRITING |
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Re: The Pen
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by AnGeL_M on
Thursday, 29th April 2004 @ 12:04:20 AM AEST
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Very Good Writing I Enjoyed It Alot !!!!!!!
Well Done Keep Em Coming :-) I To Understand Where This Is Coming From
*******LoVe**AnGeL********
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Re: The Pen
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by shelby on
Thursday, 29th April 2004 @ 02:37:27 AM AEST
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enjoyable read with a great concept
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Re: The Pen
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by afraid_of_fear on
Thursday, 29th April 2004 @ 06:02:20 AM AEST
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wow this is amazing.. very good.. i love the philosophical wonderings here..
charlotte x_x_x |
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Re: The Pen
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by LiquidChaos on
Thursday, 29th April 2004 @ 01:40:53 PM AEST
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but yet is has consumed so many...sometimes just re-reading some of the poetry i've written drags me down. i love this poem. awesome job!
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Re: The Pen
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by ladyfawn on
Thursday, 29th April 2004 @ 05:54:33 PM AEST
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| interesting.... |
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Re: The Pen
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by STRaNGe_LiNDSeY on
Friday, 30th April 2004 @ 12:25:33 AM AEST
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The pen is a very wonderful thing. And "The Pen" as a poem is a very wonderful write. You have definitely done the pen justice in this write, as my comments have not done now. I wish there was a perfect word to describe how good this is... maybe I'll just stick with...WOW, though! :)
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Re: The Pen
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by Soulless on
Thursday, 1st July 2004 @ 07:53:27 PM AEST
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great concept. The pen holds only what we can fill it with. I hope.
I also love the perspective of a pen used in this piece.
Kisses,
~Soulless~ |
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