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TO FEEL
Contributed by
PRECIOUSBECKY
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Wednesday, 28th April 2004 @ 10:42:13 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Do you know who I am?
Do you see my pain?
Do you know I love you?
when you get caught in the rain?
are you my pain?
Can I get in your bed-
Your head-
Or will you throw me to the floor
in your mind-
with your eyes-
Trying to escape
Trying to survive
Trying to hide
from your reflection in the mirror-
your eyes will know the truth
and you know that they will...
Trying to figure out if it's real.........................
TO FEEL!!!
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PRECIOUSBECKY
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2004-04-28 22:42:13]
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Re: TO FEEL
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by poetrygodslove on
Wednesday, 28th April 2004 @ 10:47:55 PM AEST
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| I really FEEL that this is a good poem. enjoyed it very much. and like how you expressed yourself . sandy |
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Re: TO FEEL
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by Rhei76 on
Wednesday, 28th April 2004 @ 10:47:59 PM AEST
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| Kinda quick, but good. it works. |
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Re: TO FEEL
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by AnGeL_M on
Wednesday, 28th April 2004 @ 10:53:41 PM AEST
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This Is Really Good I Like It !!!!!!
You Have Expressed Yourself Really Well
In This Write ...... Keep Em Coming :-)
********LoVe**AnGeL*********
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Re: TO FEEL
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by afraid_of_fear on
Thursday, 29th April 2004 @ 06:04:31 AM AEST
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yes i like this.. i particularly like the last four or five lines..
charlotte x_x_x |
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Re: TO FEEL
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by secretwind on
Friday, 14th May 2004 @ 03:36:29 PM AEST
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| Short and bitter sweet....well done i feel you on this one. |
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