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Taken Before it's Time
Contributed by
StoneAngel
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Wednesday, 28th April 2004 @ 10:39:12 PM in AEST
Topic:
StoryPoetry
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Blue and white light
stars in my eyes
It was like an explosion
Like the Big Bang of creation
slowly at first
fast and faster we go
It's like a dance, we dance all night
Pain then a rush of acceleration
It slides in, so smoothly
It's amazing how good it feels
What was I waiting for
oh right the right guy
I didn't get the right guy
I got a horrible monster
a monster who just takes and takes
Who didn't care about me or that it's my first time
It hurts, so much I cry
The b***ard took it before its time
I wish I could of saved it
I wanted someone to hold it in their hands
To cherish it, as I have cherished it
To admire it and take care of it
To know how precious it is to me
but that never happened
It was ripped away, stolen from me
Before its time
I will never get it back
NEVER
Copyright ©
StoneAngel
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2004-04-28 22:39:12]
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Re: Taken Before it's Time
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by poetrygodslove on
Wednesday, 28th April 2004 @ 11:00:26 PM AEST
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very emotional. all in a flow of feelings. thanks for sharing. sorry you went through this. sandy
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Re: Taken Before it's Time
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by Daniela_Maria_Violin on
Thursday, 29th April 2004 @ 09:59:30 AM AEST
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((((((Laina))))))
awww.... hun, the guy who did this to you should have had it cut off.... I'm sorry you went through that... you're very strong to be able to write about this... keep that strength, if you ever need a friend, you know where to find me. :)
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