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UNTITLED
Contributed by
PRECIOUSBECKY
on
Wednesday, 28th April 2004 @ 10:27:55 PM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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FIERCELY THE WIND BLOWS THE SAND
AS FIERCELY AS GOD BLEW AND CREATED MAN-
AND SITLL THE WIND IS BLOWING.......
THE WATER SEEMS ANGRY--
I THOUGHT IT WAS ONLY ME-
BUT THE OCEAN ALSO SEES
FEELS MY FURY
MY RAGING PAIN
SUCH GIANT WAVES OF PAIN
AND THE WIND ONLY FUELS OUR FLAME
MAKING US SCREAM-
FIGHT-
GO INSANE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Copyright ©
PRECIOUSBECKY
... [
2004-04-28 22:27:55]
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Re: UNTITLED
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by lil_angel on
Wednesday, 28th April 2004 @ 10:55:44 PM AEST
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Re: UNTITLED
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by afraid_of_fear on
Thursday, 29th April 2004 @ 06:06:46 AM AEST
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a very good write.. well done..
charlotte x_x_x |
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