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The Way I Feel
Contributed by
WordPoet
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Wednesday, 2nd October 2002 @ 08:45:00 AM in AEST
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A burgeoning love in heartaches abode,
Has trapped me within its emotional hold.
Love’s secret I keep, no end is in sight,
Though I long for you constantly, each day and night.
Inside me my reason and desires do war,
But it’s the look in your eyes that I’m searching for.
So show me the way that leads to your heart,
Then let me come in and make a new start.
I promise to love you forever, and then,
I’ll promise to love you forever again.
My heart beats for you, though no one can say,
What keeps my heart beating once you’ve gone away.
You cause me an ache so bitter and sweet,
And I long to be with you each time that we meet.
Now this is the way that I feel with you,
And I wouldn’t lie, every word of it’s true.
So when you see me take a look in my eyes,
The love you see there should be no surprise.
And so long as you need me I‘ll be there for you,
To do anything that you want me to do.
There’s no need to ask, I’ll never say no,
For me it’s way that I let my love show.
So now at the end I just want to say,
That you mean so much more to me each passing day.
By: Doug Morton
http://wordpoet.tripod.com
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Re: The Way I Feel
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by Lia on
Wednesday, 2nd October 2002 @ 11:52:49 AM AEST
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I promise to love you forever, and then,
I’ll promise to love you forever again...
Absolutely beautiful!!! |
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Re: The Way I Feel
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by sunshinegirl on
Thursday, 3rd October 2002 @ 03:32:02 AM AEST
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| very beautiful. This person is fortunate to have someone love them that much. You can always tell the love by the look in their eyes! |
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Re: The Way I Feel
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by MisterRight on
Thursday, 3rd October 2002 @ 03:12:30 PM AEST
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Wow, this was amazing! You've just expressed my feelings too, without even knowing it. I believe that every word here is true... obviously straight from your heart.
Curtis |
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Re: The Way I Feel
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 3rd October 2002 @ 05:59:13 PM AEST
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| Doug, whomever you wrote this poem about is fortunate to have an admirer as yourself. You have written words of love in which angels sing about. |
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