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Adore
Contributed by
ThePumpkinKing
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Wednesday, 28th April 2004 @ 08:47:54 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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It's you I'm longing for
And starting to adore
You're the thunder in the night,
and the storm in my mind
Oh special dear,
I am struck with fear
Knowing not what to say,
so I don't dig my heart a grave
Oh special girl,
you make me feel a top the world
You fill me with burning passion,
and it's turning into a fashion
I'm starving without you
And it's killing me straight through
You're the killer inside me
And the animosity
Can you hear my words?
I'm trying to be heard
I'm trying to reveal,
all that is being concealed
Can you feel my heart,
and that the miles tear me apart?
Will you ever see,
just what's going through me?
Copyright ©
ThePumpkinKing
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2004-04-28 20:47:54]
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Re: Adore
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by shelby on
Wednesday, 28th April 2004 @ 08:53:03 PM AEST
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melting write show this to her Im sure she will understand what your speaking of words right from the heart..............
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Re: Adore
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by PumpkinPie on
Wednesday, 28th April 2004 @ 09:01:23 PM AEST
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What a lovely poem,it demonstrates just exactly what goes on in a lot of people's hearts.I'm glad I read this,this is a poem I could relate well to and I loved your structure and the way you expressed your emotions.Great job!
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Re: Adore
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by sugar0986 on
Wednesday, 28th April 2004 @ 09:14:24 PM AEST
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Good Poem.
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Re: Adore
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by AnGeL_M on
Wednesday, 28th April 2004 @ 11:07:56 PM AEST
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Beautifully Written Love It !!!!!!
And I'm Sure If You Show Her She Will Love It Also....
You Have Done An Outstanding Job On This Amazing Love Poem !!!!!!!!
Well Done...Keep Em Coming :-)
*******LoVe**AnGeL*********
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Re: Adore
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by Daniela_Maria_Violin on
Thursday, 29th April 2004 @ 10:44:01 AM AEST
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| I love it... you're right it is one of your best! |
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Re: Adore
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by ladyfawn on
Thursday, 29th April 2004 @ 05:01:54 PM AEST
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oh ev this is so sweet and written wonderfully! hugs n' love nessa
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Re: Adore
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by arden on
Monday, 10th May 2004 @ 06:34:04 AM AEST
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such a sweet beautiful write. filled with love and deep emotion. a wonderful write. well done keep up the amazing work.
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