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A Million and One Tears
Contributed by
LoVeLy_4_StEvE
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Wednesday, 28th April 2004 @ 08:46:05 PM in AEST
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I cried a million tears over you, you just walked by and paid no attention to the pain i held, you just left and never came back, i look after you wondering why someone i loved so much can do this to me, you said you loved me, you said you cared so much for me and you would never leave but that day when you said those words they tore my world apart and i knew then it would never be the same.... a single tear rolls down my check and i notice it is the last... i have cried a million in one tears over you.. i have pain greater than any one else... i just wish you could see what you put me through......
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Re: A Million and One Tears
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by Kie on
Wednesday, 28th April 2004 @ 08:51:42 PM AEST
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Hi and welcome to YPDC.
The title drew me in and I thought the poem could be improved by possibly adding stanzas. In a paragraph form it doesn't seem as easy to read.
I did think it was good though and from the heart.
Kie |
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Re: A Million and One Tears
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by sugar0986 on
Wednesday, 28th April 2004 @ 08:54:35 PM AEST
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I'm going to have to agree with what Kie said.
The poem was good though.
~Brittany~ |
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Re: A Million and One Tears
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by blueheart on
Wednesday, 28th April 2004 @ 08:59:40 PM AEST
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Very honest write.
Yes, you do need to write it in stanzas for it to be read easily. |
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Re: A Million and One Tears
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by Kelsey on
Sunday, 2nd May 2004 @ 06:47:27 PM AEST
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| This poem caught my attention because i have currently went through a break up too and letting go is the hardest thing to do. Wishing he would come back, and wishing he could see how he hurt you is so painful!! |
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