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''Your Reality''
Contributed by
pyrofungus
on
Wednesday, 28th April 2004 @ 08:04:23 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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Your believing that your reality is real,
Your thoughts are true.
And your dreams are alive.
Your family has disowned you
Your in a hospital
Your hearing those voices.
Your seeing those faces.
The ones that are “real�
The ones that are “fake�
Pills are forced down your throat
by the very “fake� people that are “hurting you�
The “real� people slice their skin,
and so you think it’s alright to slice yours.
Following the “real� people fighting off the “fake�
The “real� people win, you sliced to deep in the middle of the night.
The blood kept on pouring out.
The “fake� people found you the next morning and covered your body.
Copyright ©
pyrofungus
... [
2004-04-28 20:04:23]
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Re: ''Your Reality''
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by lil_angel on
Wednesday, 28th April 2004 @ 09:24:21 PM AEST
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| Well done i really like it! |
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Re: ''Your Reality''
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by Cassandra on
Wednesday, 28th April 2004 @ 10:11:03 PM AEST
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| Very good. It was incredibly dark and mysterious poetry that made me feel like I was there. Well done! |
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Re: ''Your Reality''
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by PRECIOUSBECKY on
Wednesday, 28th April 2004 @ 11:05:20 PM AEST
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MUCH IMPACT
GREAT WRITE |
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