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When You're In Sight
Contributed by
New_York_Chick
on
Wednesday, 28th April 2004 @ 07:31:58 PM in AEST
Topic:
SecretLove
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This Is Going Wrong
But Feeling So Right
Don't Notice Anyone Else
When You're In Sight
From Day One
Up Till Now
I Should've Made
A Countdown
Of How Fast I Happened To Fall
I Hit The Floor
As I See You Walk
Through That Door
I Can Have It All
But I Still Want More
My Life Was Perfect
So You Came As A Challenge
Now I Have A Crush On You
That I Can't Manage
I Had No Doubt
You Will Come Up Here
But You Turned Around
Making It More Intriguing
I Wanna Know What You're About
Never Before Feared Or Cared
Knew The Answer Would Be Yes
But The Way You Smile
When I Get Closer Puts Me Under Stress
Copyright ©
New_York_Chick
... [
2004-04-28 19:31:58]
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Re: When You're In Sight
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by sugar0986 on
Wednesday, 28th April 2004 @ 07:36:58 PM AEST
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Good Poem.
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Re: When You're In Sight
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by arden on
Wednesday, 28th April 2004 @ 07:48:18 PM AEST
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very cute poem.
written very well. i like this.
well done keep up the awesome work.
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Re: When You're In Sight
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by Rhei76 on
Wednesday, 28th April 2004 @ 08:10:41 PM AEST
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Nicely done. I feel like a secret today.
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Re: When You're In Sight
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by PumpkinPie on
Wednesday, 28th April 2004 @ 09:13:16 PM AEST
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Cute poetry,I hope you get your crush,but for the time being,don't forget that there's nothing like the feeling of butterflies in your stomach! I love that feeling!:D
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Re: When You're In Sight
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by AnGeL_M on
Wednesday, 28th April 2004 @ 11:19:17 PM AEST
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This Is Really Good I Like It Alot !!!!!
Written So Well......Keep Em Coming :-)
*******LoVe**AnGeL********
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