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I Wonder
Contributed by
blackmarker
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Wednesday, 28th April 2004 @ 07:25:22 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Sometimes I wonder,
If I have ever made someone feel,
The way I’ve felt before,
Sometimes I wonder,
If I have ever made someone’s heart flutter,
Just by speaking their name,
Sometimes I wonder,
If I have ever made one dizzy,
With thoughts of being together,
Sometimes I wonder,
If I have ever made ones hands sweat,
Just by being near them,
Sometimes I wonder,
If someone has ever wanted to kiss,
My cherry lips,
Puckered beneath red gloss,
In the moonlight,
Sometimes I wonder,
I wonder,
If anyone has ever wanted me,
Wanted me,
For who I am,
Wanted me,
For me,
Sometimes I wonder,
I wonder…
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Re: I Wonder
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 28th April 2004 @ 07:31:59 PM AEST
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I wonder why you would ever have to consider this. Sounds to me as if you are beautiful enough to cause just those described conditions. Cherry lips,hmmm.
I wonder.........
good work! |
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Re: I Wonder
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by SuperAsh16 on
Wednesday, 28th April 2004 @ 07:34:48 PM AEST
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| great write. *thumbs up* CONGRATS. |
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Re: I Wonder
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by AnGeL_M on
Wednesday, 28th April 2004 @ 11:22:53 PM AEST
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Very Good Write Sometimes I Wonder The Same Things !!!!!!! Written So Well.....
Keep Em Coming :-)
******LoVe**AnGeL*******
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Re: I Wonder
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by MoonlitAngel on
Wednesday, 28th April 2004 @ 11:47:08 PM AEST
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Suffice it to say...
Me too.
Great write!!!
~ Moonlit |
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Re: I Wonder
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 2nd May 2004 @ 02:41:39 PM AEST
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If a someone's heart near yours flutters at the meeting of inteligence, you've definitely caused fluttering.
Your poem seems a very intelligent question posed in an smart write--A very nice read. |
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