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Why did you leave?
Contributed by
diamond_tears
on
Wednesday, 28th April 2004 @ 06:02:59 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Like a mum to me.
Why did you leave?
All the fun we had.
Why did you leave?
All the love I gave.
Why did you leave?
All the words we shared.
Why did you leave?
All the times Ive cried.
Why did you leave?
All the times Ive longed,
For you to be by my side.
Why did you leave?
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Re: Why did you leave?
(User Rating: 1 ) by lil_angel on
Wednesday, 28th April 2004 @ 06:21:21 PM AEST (User
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Very well done! Great job! |
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Re: Why did you leave?
(User Rating: 1 ) by SuperAsh16 on
Wednesday, 28th April 2004 @ 07:19:41 PM AEST (User
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totally touching. almost made me cry cuz i know how u feel. excellent write
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Re: Why did you leave?
(User Rating: 1 ) by kidpoet_213 on
Wednesday, 28th April 2004 @ 09:21:54 PM AEST (User
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Awesome write... very touching... almost brought tears to my eyes as well...
~Donna~ |
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Re: Why did you leave?
(User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 1st June 2004 @ 06:47:20 PM AEST (User
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when people leave ur life, and i mean people u really love, like the person in this, they are never gone, the memories live on in ur mind forever, and every beat of ur heart expresses the eternal bond of love between u both. trust me, people leave, but love doesnt.
ok got myself crying.(u can prob gess y and who im talking bout lol, typical sooze)
love ya xxx |
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