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The river that is me
Contributed by
lil_angel
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Wednesday, 28th April 2004 @ 05:08:34 PM in AEST
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The river is no more
Where did it go?
The river is dry
Dry? It always gave water!
But now it needs some water
Wont someone fill this poor river?
It provided for you!
Even when it knew it was running low!
Will you help it?
Fill it?
And then WAIT to take from it again
March 15th 2000
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Re: The river that is me
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by Daniela_Maria_Violin on
Wednesday, 28th April 2004 @ 05:10:40 PM AEST
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| interesting... keep posting these older writes, they're really good (not that your other ones aren't, but you know what I mean) |
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Re: The river that is me
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by Remi on
Wednesday, 28th April 2004 @ 05:41:29 PM AEST
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| simple but deep nice write |
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Re: The river that is me
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by AnGeL_M on
Wednesday, 28th April 2004 @ 11:49:33 PM AEST
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Nicely Written I Like It !!!!! Well Done lil_angel :-)
******LoVe**AnGeL******
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