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Can You?
Contributed by
TheRaven
on
Wednesday, 28th April 2004 @ 05:02:39 PM in AEST
Topic:
FriendshipPoetry
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Do you ever feel like someone's
watching you, but you turn around
and no one is there? Look at
the guy in front of you, disguised
as a friend with feelings greater than
I could possibly put into words.
Can you not sense his eloquence,
his creative mind that strives to
perfect anything and everything for you?
Bowing away as a gentleman he
does not want confusion and heartbreak;
instead he resides patiently
awaiting your decision.
Can you not feel his resolve?
Your beauty is such that he
shall never find again;
the agony caused by your
intrusion into his thoughts is
as welcome as the ecstasy that
overwhelms him when he is near you.
To know you better, to understand you
is what he yearns for;
Can you not grant him this simple
privilege that his heart desires?
-The Raven
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TheRaven
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2004-04-28 17:02:39]
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Re: Can You?
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by lil_angel on
Wednesday, 28th April 2004 @ 05:20:40 PM AEST
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| I can relate to this poem, but its really good! |
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Re: Can You?
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by Kie on
Wednesday, 28th April 2004 @ 05:25:01 PM AEST
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Hello and a warm friendly welcome to YPDC.
Your poem described secret longing, reflection and unanswered questions.
I liked the flow and enjoyed reading this poem.
Kie |
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Re: Can You?
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by Remi on
Wednesday, 28th April 2004 @ 05:47:23 PM AEST
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very sweet i hope u can find ur answer
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Re: Can You?
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by arden on
Thursday, 29th April 2004 @ 11:45:26 AM AEST
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i really liked this.
the flow was awesome and the emotion in this was very good.
well done.
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Re: Can You?
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by Archie on
Sunday, 2nd May 2004 @ 01:47:26 PM AEST
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| Nice poem |
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Re: Can You?
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 4th May 2004 @ 03:27:14 PM AEST
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| Hi, I really enjoyed this poem because its about me and the long struggle I have been through to date the girl of my dreams |
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