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MY STAR BY DAY
Contributed by
Rhei76
on
Wednesday, 28th April 2004 @ 03:39:01 PM in AEST
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I'm going away
I'm leaving today
I just couldn't stay
I'm going home
Because I love him so
He just don't know
But I'm going to show
Just so
He will know
Everyday in the rain or snow
Just so
I can watch him grow
I was wrong
I'm coming to revise the song
'Cuz you're the poem
I always wanted to ....
I wasn't right
I feel it speaking from my heart
Everyday and night
And I know you're the light
That shine thru all I made dark
I'm coming home
So you can have another
to stand so far from alone
I'm coming home
I've got so much love to repay
I've got my life to protect your days
I love you
I love you
More than I knew
I'm coming
I'm on my way
Soon I will see you today
Soon
Soon
My Preccious baby moon
My star by day
My SUN
I feel your light
I'm on my way
To tell my star by day
I'm here all the way
To show him
I Love
Him So
So
He Will Know
Copyright ©
Rhei76
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2004-04-28 15:39:01]
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Re: MY STAR BY DAY
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by Jackee_line on
Wednesday, 28th April 2004 @ 04:31:37 PM AEST
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I enjoyed reading your poem very much.
well done |
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Re: MY STAR BY DAY
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by Kie on
Wednesday, 28th April 2004 @ 05:16:23 PM AEST
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Awww I hope it all works out. This was very sweet and loving.
Kie |
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Re: MY STAR BY DAY
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by heart_breaker on
Wednesday, 28th April 2004 @ 05:34:38 PM AEST
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| i thought ur poem was beautifully written. |
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Re: MY STAR BY DAY
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by AnGeL_M on
Wednesday, 28th April 2004 @ 10:30:46 PM AEST
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This Is Written So Beautiful Love It !!!!!!!!!
Hope Everything Goes Well !!!!!!!!
*******LoVe**AnGeL********
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Re: MY STAR BY DAY
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by jaeann on
Thursday, 29th April 2004 @ 12:28:13 PM AEST
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| aren't they precious????? my precious baby moon.......i love that line.......... |
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