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The thorns of a rose
Contributed by
SAT
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Wednesday, 28th April 2004 @ 02:38:03 PM in AEST
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As I hang there
I see them smile
But my life means much more
I hear their laughter
As it all fades away
Under the thorns of a rose
Crimson blood down my face
they all look at me
with a great deal of discrace
As a saphire tear
Runs down my face
My ruby red lips
Are still spreding love
As I hide anger inside
Wich only feeds their selfish pride
We are all just slaves in this world
With our saphire tears
And crimson blood
Watching the pendulum swing
Under the thorns of a rose
In our own little nightmare
Copyright ©
SAT
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2004-04-28 14:38:03]
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Re: The thorns of a rose
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by Jellybellyprincess on
Wednesday, 28th April 2004 @ 02:44:28 PM AEST
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Chilling....
quite chilling.....
"Watching the pendulum swing".... life can feel EXACTLY like that sometimes, doesn't it?
WOW... this is an awesome write ; )
God bless,
Ellen |
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Re: The thorns of a rose
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by sugar0986 on
Wednesday, 28th April 2004 @ 03:02:24 PM AEST
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Wow! This was really good.
~Brittany~ |
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Re: The thorns of a rose
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by New_York_Chick on
Wednesday, 28th April 2004 @ 07:42:22 PM AEST
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| very nicely written |
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Re: The thorns of a rose
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by JennyFruFru on
Tuesday, 4th May 2004 @ 01:40:38 PM AEST
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| so descriptive and full of anger and sadness.... |
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