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Power of Vision
Contributed by
shanarah
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Wednesday, 28th April 2004 @ 02:21:20 PM in AEST
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InspirationalPoems
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Power of Vision
Ravishing beauty spreads over the world
powered by vision sets freedom
Hesitation of peace swirls amongst the dust
inviting the mind to dance
Enraptured by memories stored in the sole
accepting our thoughts to intertwine
Smothering the calmness that's over you
replenish the mind that misgives
Dilute all images which are unverified
celebrate life through the power of vision
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shanarah
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2004-04-28 14:21:20]
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Re: Power of Vision
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by sugar0986 on
Wednesday, 28th April 2004 @ 02:26:02 PM AEST
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This is a Good poem.
~Brittany~ |
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Re: Power of Vision
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by OMEGA_ on
Wednesday, 28th April 2004 @ 02:37:38 PM AEST
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well done
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Re: Power of Vision
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by Vitreous_Soul on
Friday, 30th April 2004 @ 07:27:16 AM AEST
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You have yet to disappoint me. This is but one of your glimmering gems, and it too shines luminously, with it's own shade of gold.
"Hesitation of peace swirls amongst the dust
inviting the mind to dance"
That line alone would take a paragraph to decipher. You have so much depth and insight in your writing. Thank you for sharing it.
Truly,
-V.S.
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