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funeral
Contributed by
spider
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Wednesday, 28th April 2004 @ 01:31:59 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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6 ft below
a body lies
the sad thing is
no one realised
No one mourns
And no one cries
And no one came
To say goodbye
6 ft down
And maggots feed
The sad thing is
She was in need
Of someone to care
Of some one to lead
Her out of her addiction
To self harm and to weed
6 ft under
An accident caused
Her lonely death
Only sadness before
Its tragic u think
But her life was so poor
No one new she'd died
What was her life for?
6ft beneath
Corpse is cold
She was so young
Only 16 years old
Her mind was bent
And her body was sold
A love-seeking hooker
Who cut deep down to her soul
Copyright ©
spider
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2004-04-28 13:31:59]
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Re: funeral
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by kailadragon on
Wednesday, 28th April 2004 @ 01:33:33 PM AEST
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wow, good write. keep 'em comin =)
Kaila
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Re: funeral
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by kidpoet_213 on
Wednesday, 28th April 2004 @ 02:50:23 PM AEST
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I agree with the last comment... this is so chillingly true... sad to think that this happens everyday in this world somewhere... but it does...
Great write... keep em comin'... this kind of poetry speaks volumes about our society today... thank u for sharing...
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Re: funeral
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by sugar0986 on
Wednesday, 28th April 2004 @ 03:10:13 PM AEST
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Wow! what a powerful poem. but so sad.
Good write.
~Brittany~ |
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Re: funeral
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by OMEGA_ on
Wednesday, 28th April 2004 @ 06:31:29 PM AEST
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Really woooooow
very amazing writting
well done... |
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Re: funeral
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by jaeann on
Thursday, 29th April 2004 @ 12:31:09 PM AEST
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| !@**'g wow.............you should be proud!!!!......simple......shocking......cut throat........i loved it!!!!! |
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Re: funeral
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by ladyfawn on
Wednesday, 12th May 2004 @ 04:22:11 PM AEST
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excellent:) hugs n' love nessa
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