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Eternally Fourteen
Contributed by
kailadragon
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Wednesday, 28th April 2004 @ 01:21:02 PM in AEST
Topic:
Grief
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happy on the outside
beaten on the inside
she hid it from the world
her pain
never showing, always knowing
the closet is no place to live
drunken beatings
ciggarete heatings
she couldn't leave that place
now she's gone
beaten to death
only eternally fourteen
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Re: Eternally Fourteen
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by lil_angel on
Wednesday, 28th April 2004 @ 02:06:01 PM AEST
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| Wow this is a great poem, so sad, and powerful! Great job. This is such a sad thing that plagues us. But you captured it well! |
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Re: Eternally Fourteen
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by kidpoet_213 on
Wednesday, 28th April 2004 @ 03:21:24 PM AEST
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This is sad... and an extremely powerful write...
We sit and wonder why things like this happen?
I don't have the answer...
It's the way life is for some... a lotta ppl these days... everything has a reason for happening... though we can't see it...
Very powerful write loved it!
~Donna~ |
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Re: Eternally Fourteen
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by jaeann on
Thursday, 29th April 2004 @ 12:47:42 PM AEST
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| the power behind this is amazing.......very simplistic and dramatic....... |
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Re: Eternally Fourteen
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by Juliet on
Monday, 3rd May 2004 @ 01:29:36 PM AEST
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| Good poem! I love the line "the closet is no place to live" and the title. Sad, though. I like it a lot! |
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