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Finally Falling Apart
Contributed by
jc_92024
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Wednesday, 28th April 2004 @ 01:15:24 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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i let me defense go down
because i thought it was safe
from all the distress and pain
but in the end thats all you gave
i opened up a part of my mind
which controlled all of my body
you entered so peacefull and safe
just to start to control me
so you made me hate you
you imputed thoughts in my mind
now that i know this
i would have never given you the time
i could of avoided the agony
of all the things you did
could of opened my eyes and saw
all the things you hid
you grabed my heart and squeezed
squeezing it full of pain
i cant believe the way you pulled me down
causing all of this strain
with this knife ill cut out the part of me
that ever cared for you
i will take my heart and repair it
and get myself through
then forget all my memories of us
erase the love in my heart
so goodbye noe im done
we will forever be apart
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Re: Finally Falling Apart
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by lil_angel on
Wednesday, 28th April 2004 @ 01:54:07 PM AEST
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| This is really good, has a couple grammically errors that i can see (maybe they are meant to be there) But well done! |
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Re: Finally Falling Apart
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by ladyfawn on
Wednesday, 28th April 2004 @ 02:12:18 PM AEST
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mmmm beautiful expression of feelings, my x just has re-entered my life and his being here has a weird effect, hang in there, keep writing:) hugs n' love nessa
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Re: Finally Falling Apart
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by Merry on
Wednesday, 28th April 2004 @ 02:12:50 PM AEST
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very strong sentiments - sometimes we let people into our hearts and end up getting really hurt - but that is experiencing life - taking chances - and maybe one time it will be worthwhile
merry |
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Re: Finally Falling Apart
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by OMEGA_ on
Wednesday, 28th April 2004 @ 02:55:03 PM AEST
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i hove nothing to say more that WONDERFUL
well done |
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