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And That's Why...
Contributed by
OMEGA_
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Wednesday, 28th April 2004 @ 01:11:50 PM in AEST
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Why do I hope you find yourself?
To meet that wonderful kind heart
That pretty deep soul I always used to see from the start
Why do I hope you find yourself?
To see that sweet girl inside of you
To have the same great feelings I always used to
Why do I hope you find yourself?
To have that same joy I used to have
When you smile, when you panic, and when you laugh
Why do I hope you find yourself?
To give me those real pure feelings
That I always used to get from your deep hidden core
To give me those charming tender smiles
Those that make my heart jump and run thousands of miles
But this time will be by yourself
This time I won’t be the only one who can see
But also you will be…
Then you will come to be so free
Whispering in my ears those little sweet words:
“After I become myself no one else could be… you are my friend, my love, and the only one for me�
And that’s why I hope you find yourself…
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Re: And That's Why...
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by arden on
Wednesday, 28th April 2004 @ 02:04:17 PM AEST
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well done.
i liked it.
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Re: And That's Why...
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by Stitch on
Wednesday, 28th April 2004 @ 03:56:17 PM AEST
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This is lovely. I hope the very blessed lady enjoys it as much as I did.
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Re: And That's Why...
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by Kie on
Wednesday, 28th April 2004 @ 05:11:09 PM AEST
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Hello Omega and welcome to YPDC.
You should give this to the special lady you wrote this for because it is very loving and sweet.
I was impressed with your poem.
Kie |
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Re: And That's Why...
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by STRaNGe_LiNDSeY on
Wednesday, 28th April 2004 @ 05:29:04 PM AEST
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Another wonderful write, Omega... Just beautiful and sweet and breath taking.
Lindsey |
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Re: And That's Why...
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by TheRaven on
Wednesday, 28th April 2004 @ 06:04:16 PM AEST
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| Very nice write. I think this deserves to be read by the person you wrote it for. It would be very appreciated I bet. Again, nice job. |
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Re: And That's Why...
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by venkat on
Thursday, 29th April 2004 @ 03:35:45 AM AEST
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Aah..very good flow..excellent freeverse.
beautifully romantic.. venkat |
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Re: And That's Why...
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by emystar on
Thursday, 29th April 2004 @ 09:51:48 PM AEST
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Beautifull and I hope she finds herself.
luv, huggs,
emy |
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Re: And That's Why...
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by Broken_Skin on
Sunday, 11th July 2004 @ 05:25:28 AM AEST
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This was beautiful...It touched me so because, once upon a time these words should of been serenaded to me..
Thank you
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