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The Existance
Contributed by
parkman
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Wednesday, 28th April 2004 @ 01:05:24 PM in AEST
Topic:
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The man he sat, staring through
Your mind, your thoughts, he surely knew
Over you, he had control
Over your mind, your body and soul
You live your existance, trying to make ends meet
But with the man, you can't compete
You're in his power, under his thumb
You're body it moves, but your mind is numb
You're a machine, a complex robot
Not capable of thinking, a single thought
Phone him up, if your in a fix
His numbers in your memory, it's six,six,six
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parkman
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2004-04-28 13:05:24]
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Re: The Existance
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by OMEGA_ on
Wednesday, 28th April 2004 @ 01:39:11 PM AEST
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good work
well done |
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Re: The Existance
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 28th April 2004 @ 02:25:24 PM AEST
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Interesting and competently written, as always. I like the correlation you made here.
Nice poem. |
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