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It should have never been
Contributed by
poetic_justice101
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Wednesday, 28th April 2004 @ 12:46:14 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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I never really wanted to hurt you,
Yet I did anyway,
I cannot put into words what came over me,
The truth is there is no excuse,
You’re the love of my life,
What had become of me?
I never thought in my wildest dreams that I’d stoop so low,
I cried myself to sleep,
How could I inflict so much pain?
So I made a vow never to tell,
Never to speak of it at any cost,
It’s not worth the loss,
Better left forgotten by one,
Rather than reminisced by two,
I was so stupid,
I guess I was scared,
Scared that I might fall in love again and have my soul bared,
It was just one night though,
I know,
It should have never happened,
But I love you too much to let go,
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Re: It should have never been
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by Broken-glass on
Wednesday, 28th April 2004 @ 12:52:43 PM AEST
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| I liked this, you expressed your emotions well. |
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Re: It should have never been
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by Black13 on
Wednesday, 28th April 2004 @ 12:59:32 PM AEST
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I agree this was a well expressed emotional poem.
I think it was very good.
Good job.
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Re: It should have never been
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 28th April 2004 @ 01:20:37 PM AEST
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Solemn but powerful. Regret inspoken. How many times do we all to that? Life and love can be harsh.
Rita |
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Re: It should have never been
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by TheRaven on
Wednesday, 28th April 2004 @ 06:00:42 PM AEST
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| The sad emotion and regret of the poem is very simply stated, but very good. Nice job. |
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Re: It should have never been
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by jaeann on
Thursday, 29th April 2004 @ 12:50:09 PM AEST
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| wow......the regret emanates from this..........i've been there...........that pain can cut to the bone.......really great write......... |
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